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If only they saw you
how I see you
they'd understand
why our fingers
fit together perfectly
and why
you're the only thing I every
dream of.
    If they saw what I saw,
    they'd know why
    I am unimpressed
    by the setting sun
         and the pyramids of Egypt.
If only they knew
what I knew
they'd understand
why my heart beats your name
between every lub-dub.
    They'd know it's singing for you.
©2009 *Teefie
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Mom said I needed to post something so I did. xD

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:iconkalinereine:
She was right, you did need to post this. It's awesome and amazing and I can really relate to it so well. It's just breathtaking.

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:iconbrokenwingbutterflys:
I love this!!!!! It's something I can really understand. Keep writing please! :]
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>w< Thank you! I'm glad that you like it!

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:iconteefie:
Yay! I'm really glad that you like it!

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:iconphotophase-nemesis:
hehe, cute!

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(= this is so sweet. i like it. im glad you wrote this. it made me very happy reading. thank you!

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i really love this. [:

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Very, very sweet. I think I have a toothache. Best one I've ever had. ;P

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Thank you!
I'm glad you like it <3

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